30MAY10
East Texas Living
Gentle winds blowing
through pink and white blossoms on
the mimosa trees.
Lazy, tan-and-white
dog dozing on the front porch,
ignoring the bugs.
Warm, slate grey heavens
signaling an impending
afternoon rain storm.
Wafting through the air,
the scent of magnolia
blossoms, smelling sweet.
Soothing highway hum
from Ninety-Six competing
with joyful bird song.
Back and forth rhythm
of wooden porch swing lulling
away today's toils.
When my friend, Donald (from Dallas) originally read this, he responded in semi-haiku: He said, "Sounds like an improvement on... So many people--
Heat, noise, traffic congestion,
and planes overhead.
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